"Jesse, thanks for telling this story! I think you did an amazing job selecting photographs and music that illustrate your grandmother's story. I think hearing your voice at the beginning, your grandmother's voice in the middle, and then…"
"When you do the second one, don't delete this one. It would be so cool to see this first version and then your "real" version. You would never know these were not your true family picture. Adding the grandmothers voice using iPadio…"
"The photos on this digital story are generic photos. I will be re-editing this video with family photos when I visit my grandmother next. She has already organized several photos for me to use and will give a greater sense of authinticity."